Check and revise your paper

This is the paper that I just got from your service. And I just check the text for Plagiarism online and it shows some problem :
Grammarly found 20 critical writing issues and generated 5 word choice corrections for your text.
Plagiarism
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Unoriginal text detected

Grammar
6 issues
Use of articles (2)
Conditional sentences (1)
Use of adjectives and adverbs (1)

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Spelling Correction
1 issue
Spelling (1)
Commonly confused words
Accidentally confused words

Sentence Structure
6 issues
Sentence fragment (4)
Faulty parallelism (1)
Word order (1)

Punctuation
4 issues
Punctuation within a сlause (3)
Punctuation between clauses (1)
Closing punctuation

Style Check
2 issues
Usage of colloquial speech (1)
Wordiness (1)
Improper formatting

Can you please double check to avoid Plagiarism and revise the paper with the grammar problem? I need a perfect paper, at least the grammar are correct. And make sure there are no plagiarism in this paper because it will turn it in the Turnitin.com it will check if you are plagiarism. thank you. and I hope you can write a little bit longer in the beginning that describing the personal experience of the college education.

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